
He covered his face with a hanky
and cried with deep regret
for the person he was,
and for the person people thought he was.
He was different:
his feelings were,
his comportment was,
his appearance was,
his walk was,
and his voice verily was;
they carried this difference in them,
so much that he wondered
what he could do to change it.
His people called him a bad omen:
his siblings did,
his friends did,
his classmates did,
and his churchmates verily did;
They said he had brought it upon himself,
and hulled insults at him,
and so mocked him.
He cried more;
this was him,
an outcast even to the very people
who had borne him into the world.
Then he opened his eyes
and looked straight up to heaven,
and saw a face in the clouds,
and saw the face always in the clouds –
the sun,
smiling at him, shining bright,
so he stood, and the rope he was carrying
threw away into the hurtling river.
He’d live and fight.
We may not fully agree with the lifestyle of other people, but it’s imperative that we remain neutral in our talk and treatment towards them. That, is simply what true love is.
Lamittan Minsah
(C) 2022 Lamittan Minsah, All rights reserved.
Dear Lam this poem hits really hard and it is a reality of many. How well you said true love is suppose to be unconditional, I will definitely go ahead to read the others. ❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Thank you many times, dearest. I’m glad you like it and are going to be reading it. It’s a feel of ‘the other side of life’, haha… a reality in our society that’s been hard for many to embrace, thus exploitation. 💕❤❤❤💕
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You’re most welcome dear!
Amen to that, it is definitely the other side of life. Society is ruining lifes for sure, sad reality. ❤️
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Yes. It’s quite true, my dear friend. Much love and gratitude to you from the bottom of my heart. 💕🌟🌟💕💖
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Much love to you as well my friend ❤️❤️❤️❤️
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💞❤💞❤🥰😍
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Such an amazing and moving piece. Truly enjoyed.💕💕
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Thank you many time, dear Grace. I’m glad you liked it. 👍
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I truly did.My pleasure.💕
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💞💚💞💚💞
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Enjoyed, thanks for sharing! 💖
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Glad you enjoyed. You’re most welcome, dear. 💞❤💞
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What lovely imagery in this evocative and visual poem!
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Thanks a bunch, Jaya. Your comments are usually fond and encouraging. 💞
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Very beautiful bro!
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Many thanks to you, Mike my brother. I’m glad you liked it. 💖
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Absolutely!
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🙏💚🙏
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Like the sunshine, the poem dawns bright. Love the ending, how wisdom arrives. Well done.
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Many thanks to you, my friend. It’s my happiness that you enjoyed this piece and loved the ending. 💖
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A beautiful poem Lamittan. Acceptance for everyone of vital
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Very much true. Thank you so much for you kind words, dear. ❤
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My pleasure
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💞💚💞💚💞
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Beautifully written…
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Thank you, Navin. 💖
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You’re welcome Lamittan ✨❤️💫
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So painful and hopeful, Lamittan. Gorgeously expressed. ❤️❤️
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Aww, Jeff, what an wonderful expression of kindness! I’m happy you liked this. Thank you many times for your gratifying comments 🙏 ❤❤
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You’re most welcome, Lam. Is always my pleasure to read you. ❤️❤️🙏
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Oh thank you. I too, my friend, cherish reading you. Lots of pleasure. 💖💖💖
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💖💖💖💖
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Beautifully written!
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Oh, thank you so much, Chris dear. 💞💚💞
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My pleasure!
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Such an inspiring piece! That’s good! 👏🏻👏🏻
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Oh sweet, thank you many time, my friend. I’m glad you liked this. 💞💚💞
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Most welcome 😊😁
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Pleasure 💞💚💞
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That’s amazing..
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Thank you verily 💖
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I’ve been trying to reach your site but every time I do, it tells me webpage not available. Would you mind checking the link you provided to accompany your personal profile. This is what appears: haseebthedreamer.blog Did you make some changes?
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A beautifully written poem, Lamittan, with a lovely uplifting finale. 😉
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It’s my joy you liked it, Eugi my friend. Always a pleasure seeing your wonderful comments. Many thanks 🙏😊 🙏
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❤️
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Wonderfull that is. Phenomenal.
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Oh thank you, Cephas. I’m certainly glad you liked it and found it phenomenal 🤗❤
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Weeh! That’s phenomenal a wonderful set piece.
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Many thanks to you again. Love is all we need to spread to people hurting, dear. 💖 It’s my happiness you like it.
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Heart-rending, hopeful and gorgeous all at once. This truly is what love is all about. We’re all deserving of being loved and accepted, regardless of the difference between us. We’re all unique, yet we’re all connected. This is beautiful writing, Lamittan. I wish more people could understand that we’re all in this together. 🙂
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Oh amazing, my dear friend Mike. Your comment fills me with great love and admiration for the kind soul you possess. It’s so encouraging to know that you like this piece. Many thanks to you, always. 🤗
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This is so encouraging and beautiful!
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Thank you for your kind compliment, Parikhit, and for your following too. Glad to connect. 💞🙏💞
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I liked author’s words mentioned below.
Absolutely right, dear Lamittan! ❤️
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Oh sweet, thank you many times, Jane. Your comments are comforting and revive my optimism. I am obliged for your support and presence here, dear. ❤
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I love the way you interact with other bloggers and I have to thank you for sharing great posts dear. ❤️
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Thanks for pointing out. It’s a real pleasure for me you love my posts and are always present here for me. Obliged for your moral encouragement too, Jane dear. 💕🌺❤🌺💕
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My pleasure, dear Lamittan!❤️
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❤⚘
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❤️🌹
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